Actually, I appear to be running out of time again. I have done some more on the book, but again there isn't a great deal of time to discuss this in depth, except to say that I did create some flow with the village scene. It's looking good, though slightly different from how I originally planned it! Still, I think it's an improvement so I'm not bothered really!
I've also been working on a section of the Squidoo Lens, whereby I have added something which gives a few more tantalising details about the theme of the novel. So, I did keep my promise after all! Click on the link below to check it out. Happy reading!